What ya'll may not realize/know is that I sometimes make several different images per week for posting, but not all of them come out good enough to really do anything with.
This one is one like that, I personally really just hate it. The clothing is fitting weird and has poke-throughs, it's an uninspired angle, the hair style isn't very flattering, and the mess on her shirt could be applied much better. I do like the pose and idea for the most part, so it isn't all bad, but man, seeing the failures compared to what I consider successes, it really is night and day.
I think that its healthy to look at your failures and analyze why you don't like them, and what you could do better. I'm not giving up on this set/setting or anything. But I think the approach needs to be completely revisited.
If you are interested in seeing other failures, let me know, it'll be free content for you. Just don't hold it against me if it isn't to my normal standards (which in my opinion are pretty high).