Preview translation.
Added 2017-09-14 09:38:28 +0000 UTC
Some sample of the new translation.
Before: Yes, Automatic Maintenance broke again after having repaired it several times.
After: Yes, automatic assistance has broken even after having repaired it several times
Before: Great Max, I've never been so clean, even when it was working.
After: Great max, I had never seen it so clean. Even when it worked properly
Before: That's not what I want to be weight.
After: I do not want to be a burden to you.
Before: if you do not have too much to do and if it does not bother you, give me a hand to finish it?.
After: if you do not have too much to do and if it does not bother you, can you give me a hand to finish it?
Let me know what you think.
Thanks.
Comments
I enjoyed the demo, it has alot of potential, but I don't like the neighbor with the pool at all. Those boobs are WAAAAY too big. She would be so much hotter with big boobs like D or E cups (not ZZZ cups or whatever they are). Right now she looks absolutely ridiculous and doesn't fit with the other characters. She is a huge turnoff for me. That's just my opinion though.
Kokusho
2017-09-17 00:05:13 +0000 UTC
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