Irina Blackwell, Ch. 06
Added 2022-07-30 11:11:40 +0000 UTCHey friends!
Chapter 6 of Irina Blackwell, "Starting a Family", is now available!
As always enjoy, and let me know your thoughts.
Brigkha and "Lucy" will be out tomorrow!
Have a great day,
xoxox
Comments
Thanks for your responses Thalaxian
Dane Christiansen
2022-08-08 22:27:29 +0000 UTCIn fact, slight extra note: Maddie was NEVER going to be part of the story, but I got a little bitchy because someone from Literotica kept sending me emails basically implying that I had to do what "the readers want" which was make Theo submissive to both Irina and Maddie - they also wanted him to be sissified - and well, I got cheeky, and thought, "Shit, I'll involve Mads, but she's totally getting dicked-down by Theo". And then...it ran away from me, I guess? I do have plans for a sequel, one day, and it's a lot more positive in tone. (Theo having an actually nice relationship with Irina+Maddie's two hot as fuck futanari daughters.) But yeah, thanks for the thoughts as always. It's been fun writing a "cuck" thing, but for the most part I'll avoid divisiveness in future stories, hahaha!
Stanley Sharpe
2022-08-08 06:50:31 +0000 UTCThe way I see it is that Theo's whole thing, from the beginning, is that he's a bit too focussed on the career side of things. Because realistically man, if someone raped me, I wouldn't be at all interested in working for that person anymore, and I'd pick a job elsewhere. But Theo gets in deep, gets that much corrupted by the "perks" of what Irina offers, and thus this outcome. Plus, honestly, I'm not done with their scenes and this way allows me to write the story I want. I appreciate how troublesome this one is, particularly these latest chapters, but if it's any consolation, it's a specifically Irina Blackwell thing.
Stanley Sharpe
2022-08-08 06:47:33 +0000 UTCYeah, having been betrayed by both of them, it’s tough for me to understand why he wouldn’t leave
Dane Christiansen
2022-08-07 17:20:38 +0000 UTCI appreciate the thought, cheers! I definitely feel that in some of these stories - you mention the Gym Futa as an example - it's distinct that the relationship isn't a consensual D/s situation but fetish fantasy, and "happiness" comes from being kind of mind-broken/dominated. That'll be the theme in certain things, but I do appreciate the emotional response, haha! I think it's impossible to ensure that all of my stories will be for everyone, of course, but I'm glad you appreciate them all the same. Perhaps I might have to experiment as well with tales where the dominance is reversed, or the like, which sounds interesting in and of itself! Something to explore in the free things, at the very least. Cheers!
Stanley Sharpe
2022-08-01 05:51:47 +0000 UTCThis in some ways reminds me of the Futa at the Gym story you wrote. I agree with Moshe, I walked away from that story wanting to be entertained, but found myself disturbed. I think it's the fact that some of your Futanari characters are so narcissistic that instead of feeling like the sub character is getting sexual fulfillment, I want them to seriously fight the dom character. And as was said, the writing was really good, I read the whole thing even though I found myself getting angry at it.
Mackitraz
2022-07-31 13:36:06 +0000 UTCNo, I get you! I think this is the darkest of all the things I've done, and perhaps I'll ever do, to be honest. I kind of set it up in such a fashion that what felt right to me, in writing it, is far from "happy". Given Irina being the character she is, I didn't really see a way for things to go more nicely! Though it's still got a few more chapters, to build on things, but tonally it's just not an especially happy story, haha! But thank you for the thoughts, I don't disagree!
Stanley Sharpe
2022-07-30 16:46:07 +0000 UTCHmm. My feelings about this chapter are extremely conflicted. Because while it's extremely well written, as always, and the action is great as well, it's just feels too cruel for my tastes. I might be alone with that opinion, but I just wanted to give my personal feedback. Great writing as always, though. Edit: And I know it's supposed to feel and like everybody's getting what they want in the end, and that it's what Theo really wants, but it just doesn't feel right to me personally
Moshe
2022-07-30 12:52:44 +0000 UTC
