OWW: 23 – Red on the Sand
Added 2026-01-25 17:25:54 +0000 UTCComments
Normuran did heal the ankle. Thought there was a line in there about that. Will have to double check and make sure. Heh, hopefully it picks back up a little for ya. It's a soft minute between tension since Joenal decisively ended the attack. I kinda agree, though. Will probably need to clean it up a bit. Wasn't intending to imply that the tension was gone but they decisively won the battle with hardly any losses. There's bound to be a lull. Hopefully some edits will make it feel a bit cleaner. :)
Materia-blade
2026-02-13 16:26:44 +0000 UTCSo where exactly did her "twisted ankle" go? Idk somehow these last 2 chapters feel strange... suddenly The war isn't really an issue anymore according to the interlude? The "extremely observe heavy commoner" also didn't notice anything about the war in advance? And a twisted ankle just kinda dissappeared in between one chapter so the next day MC can go on a rescue operation again? I've loved the story up to how which is why decided to join Patreon after the banger chapter 20...but honestly these 2 last chappys read strange 🤔 Like same with the parents "not noticing their kids were gone" AFTER A MONSTER ATTACK??? Like the whole plot that leads to the rescue that Mera is now carrying out feels super rough around the edges. Perhaps I noticed it especially strongly because I enjoyed everything before soo much and thought the storytelling was amazing... Thanks for the chapter!
Gopard
2026-02-13 16:20:50 +0000 UTC"The minds of the war trolls and goblins weren’t so very difficult to fathom. They ran if they met resistance, and attacked where they didn’t find any. " This directly contradicts the following, from chapter 22: "Trolls didn’t run. As far as most of the veterans knew, they didn’t actually experience fear." Admittedly, I'm assuming "war trolls" and "trolls" are basically the same thing.
Flying Goat
2026-02-08 10:29:02 +0000 UTC
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