OL2: Magic Script Sample
Added 2024-02-07 19:00:03 +0000 UTCToday we have another look into the final free-to-play Moment of Step 1. This from Part 1 of the story, but the event is so large it has three parts instead of the usual two. Excitingly, all three are already done right now! I managed to finish the Moment recently 🥳️. Now it's on to the writing the remaining DLC Moments and finally the "Fall Ended" portion of Step 1. We're getting there.
For now, though, we can enjoy a magical adventure with Qiu and Tamarack.
Pure Text:
tam “I’m gonna cast a spell right now. Today.”
tam “It’ll be…”
tam “To have a wish come true!”
qiu “What?!”
if believes magic:
if not silent:
mc “Really?”
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“She knew how to do spells?! And not just any, but wish-granting ones? Your jaw dropped.”
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if disbelieves:
if not silent:
mc “Really, Tamarack?”
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if not rude:
“Spell casting? You didn’t want to hurt her feelings, but Tamarack was kinda old to believe in actual magic.”
if rude:
“Spell casting? Tamarack was taking this way farther than a fifth grader should. It was making your head hurt with the ridiculousness.”
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if unsure/didn’t clarify:
if not silent:
mc “You’re going to cast a spell…? Today? For real?”
if silent:
“She was going… to cast a spell? Today? For real?”
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tam “Yeah! We’re gonna make wishes and those wishes are gonna happen.”
qiu “How are you gonna do that?”
tam “You’ll have to see.”
tam “Though, to get your wish granted we’re gonna have to bring our own offerings. And it can’t be money or some trash!
tam “It’s gotta be something you like but will give up for something else. You won’t ever get it back, so be prepared.”
qiu “Hmm…”
“After doubting Tamarack from the start, Qiu was officially intrigued. She’d pulled him in through sheer insistence.”
“Usually, Qiu was the one getting her on a hook. But this afternoon, he slipped his hands into his pocket and embraced Tamarack’s fantastical tales.”
qiu “I’m in. I could try doing some magic. It sounds fun.”
tam “Good.”
Comments
Do you believe in magic in a young girl's heart? How the music can free her whenever it starts? Whenever I hear the word 'magic', that song gets stuck in my head. I don't know if I believe in magic but my MC does!
Flightwings
2024-02-08 05:48:28 +0000 UTCTamarack what are you gonna do to these sentimental keepsakes, smash them in front of your friends?? Throw em down a well? xD
ItaLii
2024-02-08 01:33:37 +0000 UTCI wonder/hope if either of them have a crush on our MC that their wish will involve us somehow and we will find out in another step what their wish was about 😍☺️🤞
Lexi
2024-02-07 23:59:11 +0000 UTCI love this game so much for the fact that ballet aside, my MC's interests align almost exclusively with Tamarack's, but the chosen LI is actually Qiu. In a lot of games with romance content, you'd have to have a MC with similar interests and beliefs to any given LI to be able to "romance them", but the fact it's absolutely not necessary here is so awesome.
Konoi Kurozora
2024-02-07 21:55:24 +0000 UTCSweet. tam is best girl material. purest baby.
Yarino Tengoku
2024-02-07 21:07:16 +0000 UTCMe (30) peer pressuring my friends into doing a lil witchcraft *as a treat* I'm a bit of a Tamarack myself haha
Shannon Hash
2024-02-07 21:06:24 +0000 UTCWell, the ones that aren't truly yours are what they are, but that's just the ones that aren't what you were meant to keep.
GB Patch
2024-02-07 19:42:55 +0000 UTCAwww 😂 but they're sooo important
Doveless
2024-02-07 19:40:48 +0000 UTCYou can't give away someone else's notes as a sacrifice for your wish, even if you consider them special. Qiu is gonna be right there and wouldn't be keen on it, aha.
GB Patch
2024-02-07 19:34:06 +0000 UTCI wonder if that means we'll have the option to bring one of Qiu's notes? (Whether it be the original, grocery list or intentionally made note) assuming that some choices we choose make it so that MC cares about Qiu's notes (mostly referencing to the intro note and the class note though)
Doveless
2024-02-07 19:29:14 +0000 UTCAnother great script! My mind is spinning with the possibilities of how this may turn out! Great work ✨️💕
Jas✨
2024-02-07 19:21:38 +0000 UTCReading this.... "Can Tam be the offering" 🤣
Vera
2024-02-07 19:15:40 +0000 UTCWow! So much progress! I’m excited. And I want to see what Qiu will give up.
Kara Onasi
2024-02-07 19:07:05 +0000 UTCIf I can't wish to marry her then reference it during our wedding I will riot 💖🙏💖
Nora Knox
2024-02-07 19:04:18 +0000 UTC
