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Added 2021-07-19 23:57:42 +0000 UTCEdit: literally a slight dialogue change cus I didn’t like it previously.
Alrighty alrighty, thinking I’m almost done now
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Asfjsbdjawjfni your comments are so sweeeeeett 🥺😖💕💕
Nine Number
2021-07-20 13:35:55 +0000 UTCI love how the emotion of the dialogue and their faces are so in sync. They aren't overly expressive and therefore doesn't pull me out of such a tender moment. That sweet 'hide me from the world b/c I'm kinda embarrassed' to that chef kiss panels of 'its just us' from each character's point of view and how they react to seeing each other ❤️❤️❤️. Omgosh this is so cute! You nailed it. I don't know what the revisions were but you made a good call.
Circusofink
2021-07-20 13:29:16 +0000 UTC
