UPdate: some other stuff- pretty boring but its a set up for karaoke! i just wanted to show frustration and building tensions so that the lads can let loose in the coming scenes
scary mammon- but i will not elaborate more :)
i changed it! i didnt like it so i had it changed- i feel a little better about it now
I will be augmenting this! So expect some changes. I don’t like it right now so I think I need to add and slow the pace a lil. Will come back to you in a dozen hours
got the canvas! 16 pages woooo- though i think i want to spread out these pages but i cNT SEEM to lol. i did my best, its a draft for a reason haha
edit: 4 pages instead of 16 forgive me. the number became a little too much for me to handle. however four pages is a-ok! either way i will try to prioritize making it all, rather than in chunks of 4 just to prevent storylines or moments to be squished into 4 pages rather than if i had more pages to work with it will or possible be longer. you know the idea to fill 4 pages could both be limiting or too much depending on my story beats, so the priority will still be seeing the canvas as a whole.
hello office AU! back again on that grindset! personally while this is funny and humorous to me, i dont find great substance to this. maybe if i were to rewrite this ill somehow either condense or do something else under this mall/shopping arc. what you see is about 1-2/3 of the arc itself, planning to add more gentle and romantic scenes as well as moments of joy rather than humour. the funny bits were what kept me drawing though ahaha