SINS- office AU comic 401-508 sketch

 UPDATE: changed alot! i removed the drugging scene and instead had mammon prevent it from the very beginning! this means i must change quite a bit, but its alright! i decided for a more lighthearted scenario, still with the weight of Lilith's fears being realized but with much less strength to it, keeping the story higher in its friendliness. i realized the heavy tone was almost out of left field, and with a friend checking the changed and original, liked the changed one better. while it isnt a perfect change, i still see some things that can streamline the process of events better, this is still a simple sketch/draft of the story!

more of lucys thoughts! and some mammon mentions

update: time for lucy! AND decided to scrap the nightmare sequence. felt like i can convey things without it. like i really didnt need a nightmare.

update: DECIDED to revamp the last update, overhaul it into something better. unfortunately the i never lose mammon image is gone, despite it being very humorous it felt out of place, and so did the rest of the pages. this is my opinion but i thought it needed a different dialogue branch as well as something that ties all the events together more cleanly.

UPDATE :finished the arc! and changed previous post to be shorter- i decided some things were unnecessary and as well as changed some dialogue. i wanted to show liliths mental fortitude despite his fears. but i didn't want him to be perfectly fine either, just optimistic (later page). i hope im doing well, honestly i don't know if my writing is good. yeah some of it if funny, but its certainly giving me much room for thought. still ill keep moving on, i have to remind myself its just one story out of many with these characters. i want to finish this and give it the happy ending it deserves.

update! two things- i changed some pages inn the previous page, primarily though mammon was not characterized properly. currently im working on the next update, but its experimental, so i might scrap it. i gotta brainstorm now what to do now a large portion of my arc has been completed.

update! CONTINUATION one is an alt- i decided the violence was too much and go for the more accurate talking on the phone aspect of mammon. hes a financial analyst, he has other people to do the job for him.

cw for drugging -reaction and fears from the drugging. the good day was a ruse unfortunately

added more 16pages- now a kiss!

a little boring but oh well, for a future me to deal with. imm more interested a little later in the story