update: added four pages! 613-614 draft (39)
SOME intimate times, but not graphic, just suggestive
the book club! little bits of here and there!
more animal time, and also meeting more friends! time to bring back that audiobook bit.
changed almost to killed, i was wishy washy about it, but this makes it more concrete. NOW for something lighter! have animals! the pet arc is on its way
have some mammon revealing some more of his past, and small bits of lucy. it was package! but its not all that it seems. so far this is a temporary comic page, i'm still thinking about the best way to write this again, if i need to. if you have any criticisms go ahead and tell me! i don't mind, i want to actually work on the comic and make it better and more enjoyable to read, for me and for others. while its a personal project, its something i want done good enough for me to actually read it all together. if you dont want to write it down. you can message me! in regard to the page, i was wondering how to add lucy's past, if he reveals it at all, i want to show that he is someone who is a lot more reserved in telling his secrets, even if it is mammon. lilith was more open due to his general positive outlook towards mammon and while lucy knows of mammons kindness, that doesn't mean he wants to reveal so much. eventually i want him to, where he feels like its time and actually is vulnerable. lucy has more of a, don't worry mindset while he is definitely fighting mental demons, especially his current flaw- paranoia. lilith understandably has it, but lucy has it worse, where he cannot even trust his most loved people. his fears stem from his past and was often realized so it never felt too much for him to think such. cameras, trackers, gps, weapons training, obtaining weapons,etc, all to protect himself. sometimes he needs to hear liliths voice when he's in the bathroom alone, just because he is afraid of being vulnerable and open to being ambushed. he used to need constant reassurance, but now he keeps these things to himself.
iliths past! its a little sad, but it ends on a positive note! lilith had a harsh upbringing like mammon, where he did what he was told all for love, but realized earlier that he was abandoned. he had path that was laid out for him, given the way he was brought up, but realized later on it wasnt his calling. however he cant say ll the decisions he made were bad, but more nuanced. still at the end he met people he could call his family and began trusting people again. now my next goal is to have lucy's backstory, as well as revealing more of mammons past. i wonder where i should go with the knocks, is it the people thats been harrassing lucy, or something lighter? maybe both? idont know yet, but i want to finally set out to write lucy and mammons story and their deepening relationship. honestly i wanted the spam to start ealier, so i could have the set up of it for longer, but alas my ideas dont come that quickly and that early in the story. ill just have to accept it started here, and when or if i ever get to the point of lining and officially rendering this, ill have this plot point set earlier, and more plots in general set more evenly.
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