UPDATE added 677-680! hmm birthday boy arc??? mini vacation??? lets see. ill have to think of this arc a bit. it reoughly involves a lilith discussion of reminiscing, lucy storyline progression, and fluff. might rewrite- ill keep you posted if i do any changes.
673-676! limits matter and lucys a dummy
added 669-672! thank you for the suggestions! i got an idea to introduce intimacy, not overtly but mammons perspective as he is the most ill equipped of the three to handle it. itll add some scenes like maybe a birthday and some fluffif i can squeeze it in
added 665-668! though im showing hints of it idk if i should proceed with this arc so quickly. i might need to add some fluff in between. ah i wouldnt know how to add fluff this late to the story, but ill figure it out with time hopefully. if you got any ideas, my ears are always open to listen!
added pages 661-664!
: added pages 657-660! time for it to end. this arc anyways.
: added pages 653-656! the ending is coming soon for this arc
added pages 649-652! hopefullly it translates well
ADDED pages 645- 648! the perfume is because it was the same one! in the previous updates, he mentions that her perfume is strong, and its brought back all the way over here!
added pages 641-644! the perfume has a meaning i swear
ADDED pages 637-640 ! sickness in health will deal with lilith and his lingering traumatic experiences, and unbeknownst to him, fronted because of the drugging attempt. its making him sprial and this is what i intend to draw as best as possible. i dont want him to be a static character that doesnt have good and bad days, moments, weeks or even months. his life is complicated and his progress to recovery is non linear. lucy and mammon is the same aswell and i intend to show more of luc's paranoias as well. him and lilith have a few overlapping behaviours stemming from similar traumas, like being paranoid. mammon should have some too, due to living such a jaded life, but it pobably presents itself as his general anxious like disposition. how he is so 'soft' in general public.
added pages 633-636! some time for lilith again. i wanted to explore more and more of him. im planning one for lucy and for mammon, ill just have to try to fit it in somehow.
UPDATEl added pages 627-632! not a huge fan but at the same time dont know if icould do it better
UPDATE: added pages 621-626! some side lore for lilith. i enjoy developing him and displaying his many facets. it wont be much, a deeper talk will be done at a later date if possible, i have some scenes i need to do in between each little arc.
thank you for all your suggestions! ill be sure to review and pick some of them!
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2024-08-04 01:29:31 +0000 UTCmurasaki mamba
2024-08-03 23:23:21 +0000 UTC