Tales from Kingswood - Chapter 26b
Added 2021-09-24 14:19:16 +0000 UTCComments
This was one of the great things about writing this way. Although all eight boys are meant to be 'main' characters, some definitely slip into the background a little. James and David aren't overly exciting, but they're both very sweet in their own ways. I'm glad things between them seem real. I do like to think my characters are pretty believable (even if the set-up of the school isn't haha). Sex-free chapters can be risky for a story type that relies on it so heavily. Next chapter is also pretty light on it too. But after that, dicks flying everywhere! lol
Matthew Smith
2021-09-26 10:35:46 +0000 UTCI really enjoy seeing a little more into David and James. Definitely refreshing to see a different perspective on what’s going on. Can totally understand how David is feeling. I like the relationship between these two boys. Seems…real. That’s the only way I can think to describe it. They get along, they have disagreements, they react. Hard to put in words what I think about these two honestly lol. Also I didn’t think I’d be saying this but I love that there wasn’t any sex in the chapter. Really made me focus on what was going on with David and James. Heading to the next one!
Michael
2021-09-24 20:49:42 +0000 UTC
