TKES Chapter 2.63 Finished
Added 2021-11-26 16:30:06 +0000 UTCHad hospital appointment so I didn't get much done yesterday unfortunately. Apologies for that.
In this chapter, I had someone offer a bunch of suggestions. I was curious if you could provide your input on these, whether they would fit or not. Would they make the story better or not? Feel free to comment in the file on each adjustment.
I'm curious what you think.
Comments
I thought they were helpful
WhiteRabbit
2021-11-26 17:12:16 +0000 UTC
