-Early Access- Captive comic Chapter 2 (page 12- 15)
Added 2023-10-29 18:41:26 +0000 UTCWe're almost at the conclusion of this chapter! When I wrote this chapter, I was afraid this part would be too cheesy (And then I wrote my third chapter and it felt more cheesy lmao!)!
I don't know if it is noticeable but I'm starting to be tired of shading every page haha! I will go back into flat colors for the rest of the comic (once this chapter concluded)! Plus it will really train my lineart skill! I'd appreciate it greatly if I can improve it! (See I try to motivate myself into this decision haha! I usually hate my lineart+ flat)!
Initially Miguel's brother wasn't in this story. I usually HC him as dead (as part of Miguel's several losses mentioned in the official artbook) but I kept thinking about very cute and funny moments Miguel and the spider heroes could have thanks to this character!
So dear Gabriel is resurrected and he will be part of this chapter bonus content and also in chapter 3 bonus content!
Comments
I am glad you think so!
yakichou
2023-10-31 10:42:02 +0000 UTCHe is as stubborn as Miguel but differently haha!
yakichou
2023-10-31 10:41:50 +0000 UTCPeter refusing to let go is so cute ๐ญ๐
jules
2023-10-31 07:40:28 +0000 UTCSo. Sweet! ๐ฅน
Brookie
2023-10-31 05:21:24 +0000 UTCSony needs to introduce/show Gabriel in a flashback or something in the next movie because we Needโข๏ธ him ASAP keep up the hard work!!!! ๐ฉตโจ
gaygerthelame
2023-10-30 21:35:49 +0000 UTCPeter is working is magic! I try to keep Miguel's universe like in the movie! :) The BG also has sketches lines but it is not very visible! Thanks! My partner made Ben's card and it is also my favorite one! He is so dramatic and silly haha Thank you for your comment, it means a lot cause I worked hard on this comic <3 I really appreciate your comments
yakichou
2023-10-30 14:32:28 +0000 UTCPeter's smirk is so cute! All that anxiety fading while Peter is being annoying is such a cool detail! Also I love that you leave in the sketch lines for Migs and Gabri, like in the movie! Never noticed that before. Kudos for all the details of the get well cards, loved Ben's especially ๐ โค๏ธโค๏ธโค๏ธ
Amyssra
2023-10-30 13:11:56 +0000 UTCGabri is a cutie! I'm glad you are excited! I am working hard on this comic so your comment cheers me up! I hope you'll like the next update!
yakichou
2023-10-30 07:49:29 +0000 UTCAAUUGGHH GABRI VISITED EVERYDAY OMFGNWJSJKANSA ๐ญ๐ญ๐ฉต๐ฉต so excited to see the ending!!!! ๐ฏ
gaygerthelame
2023-10-29 22:17:31 +0000 UTCLittle brother comfort ๐ญ๐ฅบ๐ฅน
SpookySalem
2023-10-29 19:25:39 +0000 UTCSobbing in my room while I read this
SpookySalem
2023-10-29 19:24:59 +0000 UTCI love siblings being cute ๐ฅบ
yakichou
2023-10-29 19:24:55 +0000 UTCWaaaaaaaahhhhhh not Gabri visiting ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ Yaki youโre killing me
SpookySalem
2023-10-29 19:23:39 +0000 UTCThey are!! It is proudly framed next to my workstation ๐ฅบโค I framed all my baby's creations hehe! there aren't much yet since they're quite young!
yakichou
2023-10-29 19:04:37 +0000 UTCGift from little kids like that are the best ๐ญ๐
Lemon Mango!
2023-10-29 19:03:02 +0000 UTCFor this card I got inspired by my birthday card my baby offered me ๐ฅบ๐
yakichou
2023-10-29 18:59:19 +0000 UTCI totally agree that Miguel seems the type to isolate himself when things become hard, like he feels he has to carry the burden by himself ๐ญ so glad Peter is there to stop him ๐ฅบ๐ also love all the little details you included on the get well soon cards. That card from Peter & Mayday with her little handprints is precious ๐ฅน๐
Lemon Mango!
2023-10-29 18:47:39 +0000 UTC
