-Early Access- Captive comic Chapter 3 (page 19-22)
Added 2023-11-30 20:55:54 +0000 UTCI just finished page 4 a minute ago so I might edit it a little bit later (I usually ask my partner to correct my text to make it more smooth to read but he is playing LOL and I'm too excited that I finally started this chapter! I couldn't waiiiit haha!)!!
It is almost 10 pm here and I slept about 4 hours last night so I'm sorry if I make a lot of typo and I don't sound that logical haha!
I hope you'll like this first few pages!! This chapter will be between 38 to 40 pages long! :) (yes...I'm still editing a bit my last pages)
A huge thank you to Jules who is my amazing beta reader since the second chapter! Also a huge thank you to JD who helped for the spanish sentences (which happen later in this chapter!)
Comments
That house looks amazing and I can see Miguel sleeping in pjs??? Double the amazing โค๏ธ
Tay Ying
2023-12-03 04:40:24 +0000 UTCI am happy you spotted all the details! I want to add more if I have time to rework some pages! He is so loaded haha! Just by seeing the spider society building and all the rooms and things there are!! I wanted to add some hc I jave for so long haha! Peter's puppy eyes power is too powerful indeed โค
yakichou
2023-12-02 19:22:43 +0000 UTCAAAAAH IโM IN LOVE WITH HOW YOU MADE HIS LIVING ROOM ๐ฉ i see the Green Goblin Mask, Mjรถlnir, and the golden DNA strand trophy(?) sitting on the shelves ๐ ya know, sometimes i forget that Migs is rich lol ALSO THE PORTRAITSโฆ CRYING AND SOBBING IN THE CLUB ๐ฉต no one can win against the Parker Patented Puppy Dog Eyesโข๏ธ , even the toughest of hearts fall victim to its power ๐๐
gaygerthelame
2023-12-02 18:53:38 +0000 UTCThank you so much!!! ๐ฅฐ๐
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:59:44 +0000 UTCBeautiful artwork in this. Wow. That room!
Brookie
2023-12-01 06:53:54 +0000 UTCI'll try to post an update weekly :)
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:25:39 +0000 UTCI'll add a little bit of context about this person in my bonus pages :) I used a luxury design picture cause my brain was too empty haha! I wanted to show his wealth :)
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:25:20 +0000 UTCI hope you'll like this chapter!! <3
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:24:10 +0000 UTCI'm glad you love it!!!
yakichou
2023-12-01 06:23:40 +0000 UTCFlawless as always!! Eagerly awaiting the next updates ๐ฅฐ
Kae
2023-11-30 23:37:49 +0000 UTCOh! The person in the photos! Are we going to get a backstory about them one day? And I love the design of Miguelโs home. The floor-to-ceiling bookshelf is amazing!
Hallokatzchen
2023-11-30 23:19:28 +0000 UTCaaah chou this is so cute i can't wait to see what comes next! ๐โค๏ธ
J D
2023-11-30 22:40:32 +0000 UTCI love the HC thatโs so sweet but so sad ๐ญ Iโm so excited! I will be patiently waiting! ๐ซถ๐ป๐คฉ
Rex
2023-11-30 21:30:58 +0000 UTCI love it kicking my lil feet
Mystic moxi art
2023-11-30 21:23:52 +0000 UTCNEW POST LET'S GO ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ฆ
KhonoJeya โจ
2023-11-30 21:18:31 +0000 UTCOf course!! ๐ฅน Just lmk
EXCOMMXNICADO
2023-11-30 21:15:28 +0000 UTCPeter is, once again, a big cutie ๐ฅบ๐๐๐๐
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:13:22 +0000 UTCThank you so much!! I will keep that in mind ๐ฅบ
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:12:48 +0000 UTCPeter face!!! Love his puppy eyes! Too cute for his own good.
Madame Kaede Yagami
2023-11-30 21:11:33 +0000 UTCMiggy had a very sweet life before all of this! But a lot happened since! I didnt developed his earlier life in this story since this not the focus! I just wanted to drop some HC haha! I wanted to show he is super duper rich haha! This chapter will be full spiderdads ๐ฅฐ
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:09:04 +0000 UTCOMMGG SLAAAYYY THO HE LOOKS GREAT I LOVE THIS SM?!?! ๐ณ also omg I would love that!! ๐ซฃ If you ever need help or someone to read over your writing I can help ๐ซฐ๐ป
EXCOMMXNICADO
2023-11-30 21:05:02 +0000 UTCChou youโre so badass ๐ญ๐ฅฐ
SpookySalem
2023-11-30 21:04:52 +0000 UTCAww that makes me happy! I forgot to add some details so I might add them in a couple of days when I will recover from all the hard work I did haha
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:04:23 +0000 UTCThank you!! It took me 5 hours to work on it haha!
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:03:09 +0000 UTCThank you so much!! ๐ฅบ๐๐๐
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:02:30 +0000 UTCOHHHHH MY GOD THE EX SPOUSE???? AND THEYโRE PREGNANT AHHHH Iโm so excited for this chapter! Also his apartment looks so good Iโm in love with it and Miguelโs face and Peterโs face ๐ฅฐ๐ซถ๐ป๐งก
Rex
2023-11-30 21:02:18 +0000 UTCHehehehe I wanted to add him for so looong! I should make more time to write more about him but I have so many projects already haha
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:01:45 +0000 UTCGod I keep looking at all the details and keep seeing more; nice touch with Mjรธlnir ๐
SpookySalem
2023-11-30 21:01:17 +0000 UTCI have some very precise HC about his before spiderman life haha! I had had some of them in this comic ๐ฅฐ
yakichou
2023-11-30 21:01:02 +0000 UTCAlso love the background!!!
Cicci Palle
2023-11-30 20:58:34 +0000 UTCTHE FRAMES CHOU WHYYYYYYY (holy shit these are so good ๐ญ๐ญ)
SpookySalem
2023-11-30 20:58:12 +0000 UTCOH HELLO??? Previous partner alert??
Cicci Palle
2023-11-30 20:57:57 +0000 UTCOMMGG THE APPEARANCE OF MIGUEL'S SPPOUUSSEEE ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
EXCOMMXNICADO
2023-11-30 20:57:48 +0000 UTC
