Oh, I see. Well, thank you for correcting this, Tmimi! I appreciate how fast and how dedicated you are to making sure everything comes out right.
Also, Akko's expressions just look so cute here, you did a fantastic job with them; she looks both shy and really happy about Sucy's confession, and it just looks great and is really fitting for this piece.
Electric Frog
2023-03-02 23:51:13 +0000 UTC
I missed the bubble and the text, it's already corrected.
2023-03-02 21:56:25 +0000 UTC
Oh, and also, the way you drew Sucy's skirt blowing up looks really well done too! I really like how it folds in the invisible wind.
Electric Frog
2023-03-02 20:56:06 +0000 UTC
I'm a bit disappointed by the lack of dialogue and Akko smirking in a bubble like I requested, and kind of wish her tights were a bit longer, but everything else here looks great! I really like Sucy's shy, blushing expression in the first variants, it looks really cute an nice. Her pose and psture also gives off a really nice shy, hesitant vibe of someone about to confess, so good job on that too, and her hair looks really nicely colored here and looks pleasant to look at. And her embarrassed face just looks great, a good mix of shock, horror and embarrassment, and her thighs are looking pretty thick and long, which is always nice to see. Overall, I like this, so good job!