The new variants looks pretty great! Love the details on Lotte's foot and sandals, and the banana and guts here look really well drawn here too! I love how you drew the motion blur lines on Lotte's foot to convey she's slipping, that looks really cool to me, and the smear lines on the banana look pretty great too ! Lotte's chibi face looks really cute, although I would've liked for them to be open and wide with shock like I had asked, but still, the new variants here are a great new addition. Great job!
June
2023-10-27 05:45:06 +0000 UTC
This is great! I love Lotte's pose, it's really dynamic and has a lot of character in it, you did a great job on drawing someone slipping falling forward, and at such a cool angle too! And her expression is so cute with how surprised she looks. She looks just as hot as last time, and I her hands and feet look pretty good, and I love the little detial of her tears falling up as she falls. And thanks for changing Hannah to Barbara, I appreciate all the effort you put into this drawing! Great job!
June
2023-07-25 02:27:04 +0000 UTC
This is pretty good. I like Lotte's expressions here, and her body, from her feet to her boobs to her face, look really nice. I also like how her ankle trips to one side as she slips, that motion, along with her pose, looks pretty well done too. Her sandals look a little unfinished, and Lotte could maybe look like she's slipping on the peel more than just stepping, but that's not that big of a deal.
The biggest complaint I have is that I wanted to see Barbara, not Hannah, in a bubble. But everyone I know gets them confused so I understand. This is still a really nice drawing, Tmimi.
I also like the background for this piece, and how you can see Diana and Amanda playing volleyball in the background while Diana loses her bikini top, and also some random girl sunbathing. That was cute and looks pretty decent, and I appreciate the effort you put into all the details for this!