Book 7, uh, Prologue plus Chapters 35, 36, 37, and 38.
Added 2024-03-27 00:52:42 +0000 UTCOkay, guys. These chapters need some ex
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Two things, I think you put it in the perfect spot, really needed a break from the action. Second, Donuts Dialog was fucking fantastic! Top notch!
Sean V
2024-07-20 18:31:57 +0000 UTCAmazing stuff. I know I am late but maybe you can have this as a prologue but WITHOUT revealing the decision by Carl at that. You can have the REVEAL of Carl's decision and the line about party just before where this chapter falls
Faisal
2024-07-14 12:51:52 +0000 UTCYeah I feel like I just did a line of coke. Super cracked out and jonesing for another one. This is so so so good Matty
Kaitlyn
2024-07-12 22:24:13 +0000 UTCWell, I am late to the comment party, but I kind of love how everything was connected in this. If it was the prologue, there would be a big surprise in the middle, which I loved. Also, this quote needs to be on a mug: "Oh, honey. Juicy is Mama’s bread and butter. Give me the tea."
James Houx
2024-05-17 18:10:08 +0000 UTCI feel that last chapters revel of Princess Formidable actions and Carl's comment to Donut on not worrying about it, were more impactful since we didn't yet know what Carl did to the fail safe. I think the current placement of the second part of the interlude is right on the money right here or after chapter 35.
MGH
2024-05-05 22:35:41 +0000 UTC
