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Post 242: Date is Set

KLCTV File 67:PHP30000.5

Mirrored SMS Chat

22.10.20¥¥

start 20:17:10

end 20:20:55

:: see also accompanying video file 844:CAM005.0768 ::

Subj MM1-A (aka “Melissa”)

Subj m000001a-J (aka “DoctorJ”)





























<Subject MM1-A Image Upload>

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thanks so much to good friend Antares for helping me edit the animation. Would appreciate the feedback from readers: did you read the text chat from the video or did you just scroll through the static images? Did it hit different as a video, and should I do more of these?

Post 242: Date is Set

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Cool thanks :)

stevebasic

I also enjoyed watching the text, I watched that instead of reading through. I wouldn't want it all the time but it was definitely a fun bit of variety.

Conor

I’ll make sure you get a mouthful ;)

stevebasic

I really enjoy kissing. Nice, nice kissing...

CW Moss

I'm glad lol that you caught on to that - the spying angle. And yeah I have no control (with the software I used) in adjusting keystroke speed, etc - that would maybe make it more personal/less homogeneous. And yes of course I llllove working with voice actors as well, though there are hurdles there, too. Thanks for the feedback!

stevebasic

It's an interesting addition, but maybe it adds an extra layer of distance instead of making us closer, so I'm still not sure about it. Especially because it's very complex. You got such a good animation with a lot of things going on, and at the same time having to realize that this is a spy software, recording every single key press in real time, is a lot. Also the pacing is maybe too omogenous? not sure. I think you can grab some more rudimental but effective inspiration from erotica voice acting on twitter!

Ok thanks- I thought it'd be a nice twist. Got the idea from a good friend who started up a full story doing just these text animations, no real prose. There's something in the anticipation, watching the character type and seeing what they have to say, that was kind of exciting to me and I hope that came across here in this GITJ entry.

stevebasic

I loved it! I thought this was really clever and hope you try this or build on this in the future as this really continues to immerse yourself (the reader) into the story

House Gnome


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