Interlude - Ritual
Added 2020-11-01 23:47:21 +0000 UTCComments
Zach is really growing on me, before this arc I was pretty neutral about him, but now I like where he is going
Hunter Dupuis
2020-11-10 01:32:14 +0000 UTCHey, just wanted to say thank you for the great story and your hard work. I always know a story is going to be good when I spend a lot of time daydreaming about possible events and characters in the author's world. Personally I've liked Ryun and Zach from the beginning and I could see how they both would probably develop. I've really enjoyed your world building, I feel like I learn more every chapter while simultaneously realizing how much more I don't know yet. Take your time, relax and I'm sure your story will flourish. I follow a lot of different web serials, from the biggest ones to lesser known ones. I've stayed with serials that started off small and became big time. So trust me when I say that no matter how much better your writing becomes, what your output is, etc there will still be backseat drivers. It's a great story, that only you know the whole of, so just put the pen to the paper and there will be people that read. Thank you!
Tristan A
2020-11-03 04:53:14 +0000 UTCMe also, the Zach story is quite gripping. He’s in for a big reward when the high ranked finds out he saved his daughter. I normally only read these chapters once. The exception was when Ryan first took on Eerve back at around chapter 100ish. But I’m going to read that one again! Thanks Ivan
2020-11-02 23:36:49 +0000 UTCI have genuinely been enjoying this part of Zach's story a lot more than previous stuff. It feels like his side of things is finally coming into it's own
Se7enworlds
2020-11-02 01:54:53 +0000 UTCone reason why I joined the Discord... it notifies when a new chapter is out
TBates
2020-11-02 01:37:21 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter reading that fight was so amazing. It was so descriptive it was like reading a manga. Shit was beautiful and Zach is a beast.
K A N O
2020-11-02 00:04:53 +0000 UTCAmazing Zach Arc. Love it so far.
Puri Iresan
2020-11-01 23:59:16 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! Does anyone else have a problem with the app where new content doesn't show up on the main feed at the beginning of the month?
PrimordialJay
2020-11-01 23:57:11 +0000 UTC
