Example of YCH work and bad ending scene
Added 2025-06-13 01:40:38 +0000 UTCHelp me check the language before posting read for free on twitter and bluesky.
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Maybe page 6 too. Looks like he's trying to say "Let me give!!" Change to "Let me go!!"
SBastian
2025-06-13 03:17:19 +0000 UTCOnly suggestion is page 5. Change "be...if they saw they father in this condition..." to "be...if they saw their father in this condition..."
SBastian
2025-06-13 03:14:11 +0000 UTCI really like this piece of hair it makes me feel hot ๐ฅ
OmaShiji
2025-06-13 02:35:32 +0000 UTC
