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Chaos Chapter 27: Time For Action

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He doesn't get immediately yeeted, but he plans to go instantly the moment he accomplishes his goal so his trail goes completely cold.

BronzDeck

Good length, not too long or short, his gains though are practically making him 'over-leveled' for this world's scenario, I can hardly wait for his fight against Adam Smasher. Sadly, the only pity is that he's in a time before a certain DLC, but hey, I still love it! TFTC and seriously, I need MOAR!

Rauko the varment

Great chapter, and the cyberpunk arc is a good length especially with the powers he gained and the objectives he entered the world with, he outscaled his objectives relatively quickly, so it fits he’d move on just as quickly.

MercerV12

It was certainly a ride the whole way through. I feel like there could have been more done for this arc. There wasn’t a lot of side quest going on and there were more potential tickets to be made but he still accomplished a lot. And if the moment he completes one of the tasks means he automatically gets yeeted to the next world then there isn’t much that can be done about it. Can’t wait for the slaughter and the new world. Any spoilers for what it is? Good stuff man and can’t wait for more!

Loghead101

"Puh-! It's so unfair, why are miracles so discriminatory? Why can't cute AI girlfriends learn Miracles?" I'm against this, not from a game balancing perspective, but from a "It makes Giffany sad." perspective.

RJKY

Great chapter and great arc. I am loving how you are handling the inevitable power escalation problem by just having him have a goal from word go. It keeps it interesting because the missions can change with his power ceiling as you can make it things that are helped but not steamrolled by being powerful. It also has potential for nudging things without it feeling forced. Can't wait to see the very deserved Arasaka roflstomp and what the next world and mission entails. Keep cooking dear author.

zzzomegazzz

I can understand why the cyberpunk girls aren't coming with us. Trying to write them along with whoever else we meet later on would be too much.

Jacob Faircloth

Honestly it's a great length for a traveler to spend in this kind of lower power ceiling world, the kind of feats he can get here are lower than he can really grow with but it does its job to shore up his foundation of powers and experience really well

Icarae


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