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Added 2023-04-11 05:48:06 +0000 UTC
Comments
Really good work moving into doing this reveal! I really like the little touches here, you have a dance between them, where our mad scientist friend does something and Ambar tries to preempt it. I also really like that he's clever enough to realize what she's doing as well as start taking her more seriously; while he's still making the biggest Bad Guy Mistake possible, he's at least also trying to mitigate and no longer taking his chances with her, which says a lot about his character and personality. Every page now has me excited for the next one!
Deadhorse
2023-04-11 14:12:45 +0000 UTCOh! It's nanomachines, son!
MechaBlerd
2023-04-11 06:22:22 +0000 UTCcan`t have a good villain without the right amount of soliloquies ^^
Zorro Re
2023-04-11 06:06:53 +0000 UTCyes, get him monologueing, how great he is, and how everyone is beneath his intellect, and how the world will soon be his. ...
Olaf
2023-04-11 06:01:34 +0000 UTC
