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Added 2021-08-17 19:27:38 +0000 UTCHere are the first pictures of my new short story, which for a change do not contain any text, because this time I want to let the pictures speak for themselves ;)
Sorry for letting you guys wait for so long!
I've been having hardware problems for the past two weeks that have not allowed me to render my work, as rendering was causing my workstation to crash...
However, I have now fixed these problems by replacing the faulty parts with new hardware!
UPDATE/FIX 29.08.2021:
Fixed weird looking nails, ears and teeth
UPDATE 12.09.2021:
Added comic stlye pages
Comments
Yes, when I started this project, I had much more time, so I could make the story more fast-paced. I'm trying to get back to that pace, but I need more time to do so.
2021-08-29 10:43:55 +0000 UTCAppreciate the response. I understand what you're saying about the posing taking time. I'll say again that I don't mind how long it takes to release new content. That's totally fine and I'm not asking for it quicker. What I meant was if you compare the start of the locker room comic, the main character progresses through several sex acts in relatively few pages. Then later we have effectively one sex move from pages 153-234. From a layman's perspective it feels like the poses, the faces, and the body shapes change a fair amount, representing what I'd think was a large amount of work on your part. But if it were animated, this section would represent a couple of seconds of film. It's like super slow motion since we see the action over ~80 images. Again it's not a comment about the level of work you put in or the speed of releases. You do a ton of work and stuff comes out when it's ready. No complaints. It's just a comment on the pacing of the story and what you choose to put your time and effort into.
darkhawke
2021-08-27 04:24:46 +0000 UTCDon't worry, the upcoming update gets really sexual real quick ;) It's the theme of this story: From casual beach lifestyle to extreme depraved horniness... And the reason for many pictures instead of fast progress is my lack of time as posing and morphing takes much more time than setting up multiple camera angles. But this may change at the beginning of 2022 when I have much more time to work on my projects!
2021-08-26 18:31:04 +0000 UTCSo not sure if it's just me, but it would be nice if your stories proceeded at a faster pace. You generally take a fair bit of time for each content drop of ~5-15 images. That's fine, I know stuff takes time. The issue for me is that the images we do get either aren't sexual in nature (what we're all here for) or are the same pose from 4-5 angles. In terms of sexual content value per post, it feels rather low. I follow some other 3D creators who do similar comics and the can cover similar ground in 50-60 images vs 300+ for some of your older works. This comic seems promising, but based on the first 12 pictures it feels like we're a year out from getting to much of interest.
darkhawke
2021-08-23 14:31:19 +0000 UTCBetter late then never I guess
ZwiebelTVDE
2021-08-17 22:16:25 +0000 UTC
