Micchi Versus the New World - Chapter 24
Added 2020-08-26 00:08:38 +0000 UTC
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True, the orc tribe of the Rolling Plains has been left out for the past twenty chapters. I do plan on introducing more more more characters, but I need to find a way to make them relevant, and not just a one-off show up and gone kind of thing.
2020-08-26 02:51:39 +0000 UTC[EDIT: sorry next bit got off topic LOL !! Fix+post Scribble later 4 "Succubus" - AH get back work me!!! ] - Just one thing sweet author - Add ALOT more of that Girl Love & "action" to "Succubus". This along with longer time (chap lenght/content etc) given to it !!! - Always felt shorter than Guy's etc & seem less "intense" or "passionate" for girls often (seen on-screen) etc. EG. Cutting away b4, just start or mid-way into moment or stage at (like Hitomi), & 3p+ moments with Girls!! ESP. EG - impostant Sis (cut short 1st time & none since) & TRUE love interest Mio (confession night skipped !!!)
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2020-08-26 01:52:24 +0000 UTCBeen busy, so haven't had time to post last few days. So till I FIN up very soon- Loving your stories J-Rabbit !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D - And Quickly- # Awwwwwwww Micchi & family :) with new "child" Kawa # Kawa knows whose the "Alpha" in the family (/relationship) = Loraine :P # Love know point Micchi at in Bedroom department; her doing to Loraine etc ;) # Kain is awesome (male) character :D # Why hasn't the guild created new rank after breaking "Stone" & new symbols appearing - which presumably Frey drew in MSG she sent ?? Atleast prelim give something like SS+ (dont recall have) or SSS # REEEEAAALLLYYY need go back, or finally reveal what HELL happening Orcs & women there. Is Micchi keeping tabs as leader & check girls? Did she move them closer city keep eye &/or get recognised by Kingdom? AND/or sent some ppl to fix up & build some actual good structures etc # Here's predicting Other-worlder (s) in Tournament - new characters unrelated to MCs (traditional Iskeai to parody etc) &/or gangsters; like Top 4 Leaders of NSEW
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2020-08-26 01:49:46 +0000 UTC
