I thought about an anthropomorphic female hyena, but figured it could come up another time. This chapter just goes to show how much witches are being underestimated, even if the kingdom of Vessyra worships sex and all that, there's no way they could have anticipated people more horny than them lmao
2020-08-19 02:48:18 +0000 UTC
PS - Mira
Have say, didn't put much thought into it being all three of them in trial, so when that came up & Mira had to go, I actually felt pretty bad for her. Not just about Ellori, but possible problems of it having to be with guys.
I mean as a "witch" its prob not outside her wheel-house (hopefully), & she seems maybe up for fun if includes other girls. However, if not fully 100% Lesbian, Mira atleast it seems & seen from story it would be right up close to there on sex-spectrum.
Kinda connect to comment raised earlier with Mushroom-futa scene that I doubt Mira has little experience - as said in chapter - with having more than just fingers up there eg. Academy toys & BDSM - Certainly help dealing with plus having EXP with such situations
Sektos
2020-08-19 01:38:53 +0000 UTC
HAHAHAHAHAhaha *wipes tearr from eye* called it & loved the opening of the chapter!!! Not only that but actually I had an epiphany at start of the chapter that - "Hay, wait a moment! Its totally going turn out the Goddess is a Futa isnt it!!!" - And low and behold it came true :D
And seems my comments about a certain Feline Priestess & potential hairballs made its way into the story :P lol
That and using Beastfolk :) --- I prob wasn't only one comment on this (still need check out Discord now signed up) - but THANKs anyway dear Author :D
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Another great chapter!... but ... um ...My "only" dissapointment is-
Its too SHORT !!! Just a one parter & so "little" written & described (of & during trial) !! :O
I'm truely shocked dear Author, SHOCKED !! Are you perhaps felling unwell? Dear Gods, you're not sick are you !? *tears of concern* - LOL :P
I mean - THAT was the trial !?! To quote Ellori - "Just how many are we going to have sex with?!" I know part of the joke was them underestimating the Witches, but this is nothing compared to what Ellori's had & gone through before!
Just 3 partners (sadly only one female), and one was just regular light elf !!! And here I was worried for moment - well more like going *ouch* - when they said "no magic"; prob include potions being the biggy !! I was envisioning a line up including of some new type Orcish creature (Ogre? pos Jap Oni style), Satyres, Minotaurs & more lol.
I don't know how long trail was (hours) with 5 rounds for dudes as to conclude "difficulty" with stamina, skill etc either, but seems too short; along with how quickly Sheila's done in aka "Spent". Again a problem when only one parter, so less details & info etc :( . I mean, so much for a High Priest & the most devout of Goddes of Love & Lust lol
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Light Elf - Considering he's effeminate & reminds of Valor (short/kid~young?)- unless he was meant (not described) to well hung in league with the high mid - high spectrum Ellori's had & skills, but his daze & red face from kiss, and not being "brave" doesn't help. Needed something like a twist, with suprise super cock & sex drive switch flip lol :P - I'd say switch him out for Dark Elf maybe, but you might want be saving that for Gale ( Orgy Witches & Priests ?!? :D )
Hynea Gnoll - An idea would be to make the Gnoll, if going closer to hyneas, a female - as female ones actually have massive clits (aka dicks) larger than males. Seen, well unseen directly, to great effect in "Interspecies Reviewers" with Elza - https://interspecies-reviewers.fandom.com/wiki/Elza