September $5 Reward - The Elven Maid
Added 2018-10-03 05:22:33 +0000 UTCBlast...almost made when I said I'd upload it. Day job work ran a little over. Between that and the extra length of this part (Part 4 is nearly 7500 words), I only just managed to finish the editing pass a few minutes ago. Anyway! A couple of quick notes about this one.
1) I'm only about 95% happy with this, I think. The reason for that is I'm not sure how well I did with describing the dance Elora does at once point. Feedback would be even more appreciated than usual :-).
2) This is the first time I didn't embed the choices for the next poll into the text. In part this is because that is getting awkward...but it's also because I need to do some brainstorming and adjusting to the overall outline (to take into account the various changes voting has made) before I offer up the options.
...That's it! Enjoy! PDF is attached!
(As always, if you only want to read the new stuff, simply search for "Part 3." That will take you to the end of the previous part.
