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July Story Reward (DoL - Merchant Princess Part 4)

Whew! Made it, if only just by a few hours. This part fought me pretty hard. In part that was because, despite my inclusion of some pet-play content in both Eros Academy and The Dungeon of Lewdity...it isn't actually a kink/fetish of mine. As such, my understanding of the subject is fairly general, which made diving into writing about training for it something of a research project. This was/is doubly true due to my own dislike of 'humiliation' based content, which tends to be a type that pops up more often than not in the pet play content I've seen others create. In addition, I needed to write something like a training montage,  in order to keep this from turning into a 5123950 part day-by-day story. That wasn't something I've ever done before, so that just added to the difficulty. 

Anyway, I think the end result is pretty solid, though there may be some tense errors throughout still, I apparently wrote an entire section in first person while I was struggling through bits of it and had to go back and fix that. All told, it came in right around 4,900 words, so just about the usual target length. Hopefully, it's decent! Enjoy!

P.S. As always, it's a combined file with all current parts. If you only want to read the new stuff, simply search for 'end of part 3.'


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