November $5 Story Reward - Origins of a Merchant Princess (Part 6)
Added 2019-12-01 02:47:14 +0000 UTCWhew, just finished editing this one! To be honest, it isn't what I had originally planned. Back when I wrote part 5, I actually had a full plan sketched out for part 6 as well. Unfortunately, when I tried to FIND those notes...I couldn't. I searched all over for the .rtf file I had put the notes in and never found it. Best guess is that it got wiped out in a force-restart when windows updated. I'm kinda bad about saving my notes files like that as I go, since they're usually just jotted down sentences to help me remember an idea.
Unfortunately, while I could totally remember what I had planned for Kat's bondage gear combination to morph into...I couldn't remember what the flying fuck waffles I'd been aiming for with Nylara's chastity bra. Net result? I couldn' figure out how to make the original plan work seamlessly with the previous parts, so I scrapped it and wrote something different. There's nothing wrong with it, it just isn't quite as slow-pet-transformation themed as my original vision for the story was. Oh well.
Anyway, as always, the PDF is attached. Also as always, it's a combined file. So, if you only want to read the new stuff, simply search for "End of Part 5" and that will take you to the start of the new part. The new section is just over 5,000 words, so I hit right about on target, length-wise, this time! Enjoy (Hopefully)!