Lara Croft - The Origin
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looking forward to the next chapter:)
2023-05-22 19:11:07 +0000 UTCThanks for taking the time to reply. This makes me really eager for a sequel. I can't believe that I'm asking you of all authors to be more naughty in your writing lol. You've definitely got me used to a certain style and lewd. Anyway, I'll be there for the next chapter. Thanks again!
Koopz
2023-05-11 13:17:35 +0000 UTCThanks for the positive feedback; I wanted to leave something in reserve for potential future chapters. A bit of character growth as she gets more and more accustomed and "comfortable" :3 but to give a more in-depth analysis of what I planned: I had envisaged her purposefully denying herself despite getting close to engaging in that, holding it back as a reward only for her to get TOO into it and end up there in the midst of flexing her powers. Got to leave something on the hook?
Al Douglas
2023-05-11 10:24:25 +0000 UTCWow ! Amazing writing! Indeed, this came out as a surprise and a great one! You did your homework on the lore of the series. Lara Croft feels real and I felt really connected to the character. Really impressed by how action-packed and graphic this chapter is. This one showcases your talent for writing beautiful and visceral hand-to-hand combat. A superb read! My only frustration: You hinted at it throughout the story but I wish you went more into eroticism and sex. This magic costume certainly seems like it's fulfilling many sexual fantasies for Lara. But the transformation was a bit prude and left me wanting more. I really hope you'll feel motivated to write chapter two and a naughty one. Lara needs to feel what sex will feel like with her new skin-tight garment! Thanks a million for this story Smooth, really glad to be one of your Patreon.
Koopz
2023-05-11 09:35:38 +0000 UTC
