Revised Script
Added 2017-12-09 13:30:36 +0000 UTCThis draft adds an extra 2 pages and cover to the work load, but i was told to place more emphasis on her ass and include Anal Vore so I did!
Give this a once over. If this seems good then the next step will be to thumbnail everything out.
Comments
Lookin forward to it :3
OhMyDaysFam
2017-12-09 17:31:22 +0000 UTCShe's very hedonistic, so she gets off to whatever gives her pleasure. And of course being a fetish comic, she's going to be extra sexual. As for her outfit, at this point I was going to have her wearing a skirt that doesn't fit and panties that she'll hike up.
Zevti's Labyrinth
2017-12-09 17:20:02 +0000 UTCSo, for the big bunny, this is obviously an enjoyable act for her, but does she get off on eating like this, or is that more reserved for fusions. Also, should she be wearing anything when she enters, i can see her being bottomless, but will she wear something on the top end? A lady should look her best when she's being the boss.
Baylith
2017-12-09 14:57:30 +0000 UTC
