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Comic 4.13 - "Coach IV" Preview

Comic 4.13 is up for patrons! I'm experimenting with the new photo gallery functionality on Patreon. If this isn't readable, I'll edit the post! I hope you enjoy. Definitely tell me what you think. ⭐


EDIT: If you can't read/see the pages, you have to update your Patreon app! (And if you still can't see them, they're posted over on the #check-please channel on Discord!)

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Comments

I love this update! I also love this new format. It's nice to have two or three panels together, and then advance to the next group. That being said, I was reading it on my laptop. It's the best way to enjoy your art.

I'M CRYING

Eeeeeeee....This honestly just made my day. =D

I am so happy to see Coach making an effort! And Bitty giving him a break so that he can try.

Diana Williams

Words can't describe the very deep shuddering inhale I had to take reading the "you're good, okay" panel. Excuse me while I process some feelings about parental validation <3

It’s 7:12 AM and I jumped at the Patreon notif on my phone. THERE ARE TEARS IN MY EYES FKSJDJL I JUST WOKE UP AND TODAY IS GONNA BE A BEAUTIFUL DAY!!!

Thank goodness no one was in the office when I saw this. There may have been dancing. And squeeing.I

I'm so HAPPY! Also, Chowder is looking every bit the very fine college man. 10/10 would awkwardly smile at him from a corner again.

liminal

Eeeeeeeeee

Something I thought was pretty important-- Coach and Bitty have this conversation after Bitty's team loses a game. Bitty seems to try and make up his lack of masculinity to his father by being good at sports-- see, Dad, I can be tough, too! So having lost a game, a home game at that- Bitty was maybe already feeling like a let down without all this extra coming out drama. When we see Coach support him this time, we know it's not just because Bitty is fulfilling his Manliness Quota™ by being a good sports son, but because he loves him and is proud of him as a rounded human being. Neat!

I was screaming internally! this was so sweet, and I love their faces!!! You can really see how they're in their mannerisms.

NGOZI!!!!!!!!!!! I don’t even have words!!!!!!! I’m elated but it also feels so TRUE of coach. Of course there wasn’t a poetic, heart felt apology- it’s coach! But he and Bitty both knew what he was saying with that and it was wonderful and clearly what they both needed. Also, I can’t believe you managed to actually put the “eeehyup” sound into writing 😂 the talent!!

Totally gonna pretend I didn’t just burst into 3 years worth of tears!! Stunning and fulfilling as always! Also, as a southerner with a southern mom...the Deep End is real...no one knows if it truly has a floor...RIP Coach

SapphicWiles

Awww, I really like how it's obvious that they're trying, and that whatever awkwardness is there is due to years of not really being able to/knowing how to communicate rather than Coach being disappointed in Bitty. I also love that Bitty gets, like, three seconds to relax before realizing this means Jack is going to have to spend an extended amount of time with his family.

I love the gallery function! Way easier to read on mobile (and it worked perfectly for me). Also I love Coach’s face on the fourth panel lmao that is an expression I have absolutely seen on my own father when my mom decides she needs to host someone or something 😂

Let's watch as bitty has approximately 20 seconds of peace before discovering something new to stress about 😂😂

Yes, I got all teary, and yes the text from the Jack was the perfect ending, but are we gonna talk about how grown up Chowder looks?

Ngozi, stop cutting all of those onions! On a serious note, I'm so happy. Bitty said what was important to him and Coach listened. This is brilliant! ❤️

Octavia Atlas

Yes!! Coach comes through! <3

Photo gallery works great for me! This was perfect and everything I was hoping for! Love Bitty’s reaction in the last panel!

i am just so DANG happy!!!!!!!!!

Ngozi. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Thanks for that resolution.

Cathy Berner

Ah!!! I loved it! It felt like a satisfying conclusion with Coach, he didn’t suddenly get perfect at being an Ally, but he was putting in much more effort and using his words!!! And that moment of ‘oh no Parent-BF meeting’ for Bitty was so perfect!

Oh wow after that last pannel I just got tears in my eyes, and I didn't see it coming! Awesome. I really hope we see some of Jack at Christmas ;)

Yay, Coach coming in for the win. 'Bout time, Rick. Loved this update. ❤️

Also, the photo gallery thing is working great for me on desktop. Love it. (Though for some reason comments aren't all loading - I was going to leave this as a reply to my last comment, but it sticks at 33 out of 41 comments.)

Gallery works great thank you. Also, I was really struck in that last panel by Bitty’s face and how he’s visibly and really believably matured - all kudos to your art x

Eeehyup.

😭😭😭 my heart is so full for bitty rn, I simply cannot.

uhhuh_listenboi

I'm sobbing! 😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️ Well done Coach!

Bree

1) EEEYUP 2) You know ERB got his extra gene from Mama Bittle and 3) YAY for Coach being supportive and calling Jack Bitty's boyfriend!

I'm glad it's working!!! THANK YOU PATREON (FINALLY :) :) :) ) And Coach now has to finish the deck; he's been putting it off for like 2 years

Ngozi

I like the new photo gallery thing, first off. MUCH more readable. Secondly GOOD JOB COACH YOU USED ALL YOUR WORDS. His "oh no i am about to enter nonstop house cleaning/rearranging until Christmas" face is the BEST, too.

Kelsey Kumpula

Talking to your parents as an actual adult! (ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ Good for them.

Sami Postma

Aahagdgahakkakjdjsjakshfjajiq NGOZI!!!! You really DID THAT. I feel like he’s reconciling a lot of his own bullshit but you can tell he loves bitty so much. Like you said on tumblr, Coach doesn’t have the words to express himself. I do wonder what the conversation between bitty’s mom and dad was like to get him to that point.. anyways, great job. I literally just got into Check Please (friend’s recommendation) and it has made such a big impact on me 🤭😭.

jc17

Can't seem to pull up the last two pages. :(

Vic or Vyxter

Awww, thank you!! It's specific notes like that which fill my heart with joy. I love coloring skies!

Ngozi

My boy Bitty can't catch a break this semester 😩😂

All right, cool! Thanks for the feedback.

Ngozi

it's the only way they can stand up and get out chairs

Ngozi

Awwww. *insert hearteyes here*

AHHHHH that HUG it's so good!! I'm so proud of Coach!! And so proud of Bitty!!!! It's such a small thing, but that's really all they needed, was this conversation - and the hardest part is just getting up the courage to do it. Then it's done and you wonder, gosh, why was that so difficult?? It's the anxiety of making yourself vulnerable to someone, even if it's something that can't hurt you, even if it's just to your son. Or maybe especially! Feelings are complicated, y'all... Good for them!!! PS I very much appreciate the new gallery function, much easier to read and I like being able to really see the backgrounds!

I just. Love this. So much??? It's just amazing, and the coloring is so good, and soft, and just *chef's kiss* amazing. I'm at work right now, and thank god nobody else is around to see me all teary eyed. And I just love the way you color skies. Is that weird? (I know it's weird)

RESOLUTIONNNNN it only took 4 chapters. XD Thank you!! (And thank you for that tip, I think folks are running into issues on that end.)

Ngozi

If you can't see pages, update your app!

I'm having too many feelings about Bitty, so can I just say the colors in this update are gorgeous. And photo gallery looks good on mobile too!

HM, there are 7? (8 pages total...) I wonder if anyone else is having this issue? I'm able to click through on my end.

Ngozi

What! oh my god, good guess--that's LITERALLY the title of the next comic?

Ngozi

the universal "eeehyup" of dads

Melanie Molinaro

<3333333333333333333

😭😭😭😭😭 that was everything I needed. Ugh. I was in so much pain after Coach III and I’m so glad things resolved. Thank you!!! Also if anyone can’t see the gallery on iPhone you may need to update your Patreon app!

fuckity fuck fuck fuck i'm crying stop crying you loser

Are there 5 pages? Or 7? I can only see five, but it's telling me there are two more. (Not sure if it's just me, or the functionality.)

Elissa Y

Don’t mind me...I’m just a bucket of tears at my desk at work! 😭😭😭

OMG.... does this mean Xmas in Maddison!

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Ngozi

I’m soft 😭

Kate

YES, good work @Patreon!! I'm glad those million dollar venture investments went to good use 😅.

Ngozi

I'm not crying, ur crying

aceremus

🥰😭🥰

Awww

Laifjhwisjfgjwixhjeo

Yayy!!! I love it!! Also, the new photo gallery functionality is awesome.

Caity Walker

😭♥️


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